Last night I was praying, I told God I wanted to write a song really badly. I said I would write a song for him if he would help me with the words, and then the words started flowing(it might not make sense or sound right to you but it makes sense in my head =P):
It feels like everything, is washed a way,
-you don't know what it's like.
When darkness comes, it wrecks my day,
-always causing fear, no hope is near...
I put my trust in them, they let me fall,
-I must endure the pain.
I try to move on, but there's a wall,
-of my memories, too high to see,
-it's crashing down on my, why can't I be free?
Living in the streets, it's not that fun,
-I'm getting desperate now,
Reasons not to live? There's a ton,
-I could end it now, it doesn't matter how,
-nothing left to dread because I'd be dead...
I went to church, just to steal,
-I needed food.
I heard the pastor say, "Now let's be real,
-Jesus Christ has come, God's perfect Son,
-His deed is done; He fought and one.
And then I realized, just what he said:
-"We all have sinned,
Jesus Christ, his blood was shed.
-He paid the price, the perfect sacrifice..."
My loving saviour, he died for me,
-it's just too much.
God sacrificed His son, just for me,
-His blood was shed, my sin is dead,
-He died for me, now I am free...
P.S. Pray for the Olsons, they need it. God, let them have a speedy recovery.
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I forgot to say, the song is about a lost, homeless teen who needs God. It has nothing to do with any of my past experiences =P
This is awesome! Almost every one has made a post...and at the end told um to pray for the Olsens! Kick awesome! :P
lol
That's funny =P
Hey, if you have any good stories I think I could possibly turn them into songs. It's easier for me to write lyrics if it was already a story, so then I don't have to write the story at the same time XD
Yeah! I have one! Its about a boy who is in love with this girl. But he can't find it in him to go talk to her...himself and tell her how he feels.
Whatcha think?
Maybe...
Howabout this?
In the end, the boy realizes that even if he does have special feelings for somebody, he should not rush things in life, for he has a long life to live.
amen!
that's a beautiful song Tim. Did you really write that? Wow! I have been praying for the Olsens. It's funny how in just a second your life can be totally different...
~sarah :)
Yeah, I kinda wrote it, but it was mostly an inspiration from God.
I've been praying for the Olsons alot, I feel really bad for them. It doesn't seem fair that something like this could happy to such a nice family, but life isn't fair =/
WOW! I've been "writing" songs for years and it is easier to write about somthing thats already kinda writen (does that make sense?) but I never have it in me to finish them because I'll go somewhere or see somthing and get a new great idea for a song. It turns out it's not so helpful if you have all these cheezy lines that can't seem to form into a song. But your song is GREAT! You really have a talent for that.
Thanks! I wasn't tired, so I stayed up two hours writing =P
A problem I had was that I tried to rhyme everything. Somebody told me that I was rhyming way too much, so I cut it down a bit and it flowed smoothlier(I invented a word =D)
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